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Somebody stop her
She’s out of control
In her own world
In her own zone
Dangerous when she gets into this mode
Her impulse she can't hold
But yet she still feel powerful and bold
“I am okay” is the biggest lie she ever told
The vengeance in her eyes as her mind steady flows
Leads her to a dark lonely road
Lord help her.
About the Creator
L.I.E
Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
Comments (8)
I like the rhythm of this. It's punchy.
I could picture myself on a roof terrace blowing your words into the wind, I love that you carried it on with rhymes for ‘mode’ it sounded like an echo to me, which makes this piece both clever and really cool sounding.
This is such a powerful story! It really captures the internal conflict between strength and vulnerability, showing how easily one can get trapped in a dangerous cycle. It's heartbreaking yet so real.
"“I am okay” is the biggest lie she ever told" You literally said everything ✨🤝
Or maybe only the devil can help her hehehehe. Loved your poem!
Powerful!
Great flow of intensity and urgency!
No, really because now my brain is flowing with ideas and will not turn off. Like I'm really trying to take a break from writing for real.