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She Asks me..

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By AL. K.Published 2 years ago 1 min read
She Asks me..
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She asks how far can I go?

I reply how far you are willing to come with me?

She replies what road ahead waits for us?

I said no one knows, only journey shows.

I said but it will cost us a lot and we don’t even know what.

She asked will there be sacrifices?

My answer was in every life’s experience is sacrifice.

Tell me please are you ready for long journey with me?

Because there is no promises or fortune and luxury.

But there is one promise I can take and make.

She asks what promise will it be?

Promise that no one can buy or sell, but cost of it is far more expensive then price of a diamond.

She asks again what could it be?

Then I asked her what is most precious jewel to you?

What is most expensive gift you want to possess?

Her answer was I want to live in a mansion have most expensive dresses and have luxury cars and servants. Handsome husband who would do everything for me.

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About the Creator

AL. K.

A guy from Latvia with sense and understanding about good writing and poetry. I’m trying to make best performance to improve my writing skills. Inspire others and bring them love justice and peace to their lives, brings me joy.

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  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler2 years ago

    OMG, AL. K. This poem is a gut punch to men who fall for women looking for someone to pay their way. A really surprise ending that I love because it speaks to how life often unfolds. If this is biographical, I hope you ran the other way!!! Excellent work!

  • There is a beauty to the ease of this ... with its subdued flashpoints.

  • Armah Elvis2 years ago

    Wow

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