Deep within my mind
I probe for answers
Seeking solace in logic
Theory, fact, history, life, death
Reality as we know it
Always going off on a tangent
Could she still be there?
Taking joy in my solitude
I only know she’s not here
Over there! A familiar silhouettte
No…, just the shadow of a memory
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Oh, wow! This one really hit me. There is so much heartbreak in these words. Beautifully done.