Shadowed Sun, Sheltered Shame
For the In Eclipse Challenge - introspective, reflective
By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Jongsun Lee on Unsplash
embers extinguished elegantly
concealed, cosmic circuitry
liminal, lumination lacking
intensive, introspective intermission
penumbra pleasance, prompts pause
shadowed sun, sheltered shame
enlightenment equals/eclipses entropy
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Author's Notes: Another entry for the In Eclipse Challenge.
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Comments (8)
Well now, this is simply awesome. It seems we did have the same idea, and you've executed it perfectly! Great job, sir!
Playful and serious at once, impressive.
You managed to get double work from your phrasing ie extinguished eloquently and eloquently concealed and lumination lacking and lacking intensive… really well done!
Oooo, you combined an Acrostic and a Tautogram for each line! So brilliant! 🍩🥐
woah woah woah 🤯. While the rest of us are trying to figure out how to start each line of the acrostic, Paul's over here combining acrostic with tautogram like a champ! Impressive stuff, my friend. You never fail to amaze me with your creativity!
ohhh, I like this one. Good job Paul!
Fabolous, amazing great effort
Impressive