By George’s Girl 2024
Life Sewing away
each stitch a day gone from life
material torn
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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beautifully stated words
an amazing talent👌
Your talent is just a breath of fresh air, every time I come to your page I am in awe. You gave us a double haiku, you laid out the message so very clearly and the main haiku, took my breath away. Life sewing away ~ You're saying the days are going by too quickly Each stitch a day gone from life ~ you confirmed it beautifully Materials torn~ you're saying we can't get back the days that were taken, we can't get back the years missed. This is too profound, I wish I could heart this multiple times. Well done Marie, another masterpiece.