
In this house, down by the river
in the shadow of Spencer Mountain,
I feel the wild abandon
of river coyotes, hunting and howling off the page
Eerie voices echoing off water, tree, and rock,
as predators prowl through cedar.
Some of my favorite trees are the cedar
growing wild on the banks of the river
Above the motion and rock
of the water cascading down the mountain,
running like a horseless page
on fire for a maiden he will eventually abandon
for another he will one day abandon,
perhaps lying with yet another in the shade of a majestic cedar
like an illustration from a storybook page,
complete with a flowing river
beneath a purple mountain
and various outcrops of rock.
Posing as a pillow, beneath his head lies a rock.
Pretending to be a maiden, the woman is lost in his embrace, the abandon
evident on her face, greater than the mountain
rising behind them like a cedar
rooted in desire flowing like a river
through the couple and off the page.
What to make of this page
resting his head on a rock
alongside this woman and river
dreaming of others he will abandon
so that he may remain as singular as a cedar,
impenetrable as a mountain.
They say faith can move a mountain
more easily than I can turn the page,
bring the freshening air of cedar
and hold steady as a rock,
patiently outwaiting these moments of abandon,
flowing through bodies like a river.
This majestic mountain is one giant rock,
an indelible page impossible to abandon
in the shade of a cedar rising from the current of the river.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.
I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.
MA English literature, College of Charleston
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Comments (1)
I absolutely love how you set the scene in the first line. It's like a story. A story within driven with guidance of sestina. Love the attention to detail. Voices echoing off water. Oddly enough I could sense the water once the voice was used to meet it in expression. Love how we get to know a bit of what you like. Rocks as pillows 🤔 clever and ancient. 'Rooted in desire, flowing like a river.' absolutely impressed with this line. 'Dreaming of others he will abandon' I did consider this line. But not enough until it was repeated a few times. We hate to abandoned. Where can we go to look for a person who would never... 🤔 As singular as a cedar. I love how wise this line is. A very memorable line too. I like the idea of a mountain being one giant rock. This poem had so much value in it. Almost like a parable. Lessons through poetic lens. I love this one a lot 🤗❤️