Silent serenity surrounds me
Softly swaying summer breeze
Sweet scent of salt and sea
Solitude, my soul's release
Silken strands of sun-kissed hair
Sapphire sky, a canvas rare
Senses heightened, aware
Simplicity, beyond compare
Sacred silence, soundless sleep
Serenade of crickets, a lullaby deep
Soulful solace, secrets keep
Serenity, my soul to keep.
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
Comments (10)
This was nectar for the soul. Extremely well written and executed, Bravo.
Beautifully written ✨💖💯
Beautiful ❤️
beautifully expressed!
I love this!!
Very nicely done.
Very serine.
Very nice.
Beautiful 😍
I love this, thank you <3