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SELF-AWARE Spiral

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By KomalPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Knowing

Drowning

Still, I ask: is help my raft?

Seeing

Bleeding

This awareness, my own craft.

Answers whisper

In hollow tones,

A mirror sharp,

A world alone.

Hating

Fearing

The knowledge burns so loud.

Breaking

Taking

My pride beneath its shroud.

Where to go

When truth is weight?

Who to trust

With this debate?

Self-aware,

But not alive,

A maze of me

Where shadows thrive.

Help? Perhaps.

A voice or hand.

Yet here I stand—

And still I drown.

Mental Healthsad poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    My favorite line is, “A maze of me,” because sometimes we have a hard time deciphering ourselves. We may understand others better than ourselves. Hmm, 🤔 lots of food for thought. Thank you for writing! ✍️

  • Lisaabout a year ago

    So deep 🥺

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Very well-crafted and profound! Praying that things improve. 🙏🏾

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This truly is a thought-provoking piece as I am still thinking about each line. 'A mirror sharp' - indeed.

  • Sam Spinelliabout a year ago

    This may not have been deliberate but this piece, to me, reads as a sequel to your reflections in “what does it mean to be human.” I think the human condition is this weird balance of self awareness against a largely indifferent universe— but this awareness of self and of the individual as a living concept is tempered by an impulse to seek unity with others. But the human condition is solitude— not necessarily loneliness but the condition of being alone— mentally. So we’re driven to love others and be loved as a means to satisfy that condition— and moments where we forget ourselves and are wrapped up in Others go a long way towards making the thing called life feel worthwhile. But they’re never permanent, and we’re always left with our own thoughts after the moment passes. There’s great satisfaction in moments where we forget we’re alone, but there’s also great satisfaction in moments of peaceful solitude where we accept who and what we are. The absurdity is that this reality— of being alone with our thoughts but striving instinctively to connect with others— connects us with all of humanity, in terms of baseline shared experience. The experience of individual awareness

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    That is super deep, girl. Why do you have such a sharp and intuitive mind? I mean "MashaAllah" ❤✨

  • Laura.the.writerabout a year ago

    A very relatable and deep poem, beautifully written Komal!💕✨

  • Gosh this hit me soooo hard as it was so freaking relatable. You captured how it feels so perfectly with your poem!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    This is stunning piece! Deep emotions ✨

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    We can indeed feel overwhelmed by the knowledge of ourselves. A thought-provoking piece, Komal.

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmedabout a year ago

    Excellent

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