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Haiku about the Secret Staircase at The Magic House
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
choking, ghosts in glass
Walls closing in, crush years like
A trash compactor
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Comments (6)
Just seen this and it is excellent, though I avoided most of the haiku challenge entries
This is really interesting. Great haiku to go with.
Whoaaaa, this was so fascinating!
This is downright brilliant Melissa! BRAVO!
Cool idea!
Drew Barrymore had a house with this same kind of story. Love the words used for imagery