You showed me the door to your heart
like I was a dog who soiled the floor
with longings for reassurance.
How dare I scratch at the door.
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)8 days ago in Fiction
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The line "How dare I scratch at the door" showcases a mix of self-blame and defiance, reflecting the internal struggle one might experience in a relationship. It's a poignant and thought provoking piece. Well done!🙌💕🥰