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Scent from the Window

A memory.

By Kevin McLaughlinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024

They say the sense of smell evokes the strongest memories,

Powerful enough to transport you back in time,

To a time when you were young, innocent, and free,

Back to green summer days with blue, cloudless skies.

When you ran and jumped, chasing rabbits in the field,

Climbing too high in trees, trying to catch the wind in a jar,

Scraped knees and tears, tended with caring words and loving hands,

Your biggest worry was making it home before dark.

Now, so many years later, you hesitate,

Hand held inches from the door.

A gentle breeze passes through the window,

Carrying the scents of warm apples, nutmeg, and cinnamon.

You knock.

The door opens.

A familiar face smiles gently beyond the door.

“Would you like to come in? I’ve got fresh apple pie, your favorite.”

You smile back.

“Yes, Grandma, I’d love to.”

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Kevin McLaughlin

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  • Esala Gunathilake2 years ago

    Congrats on your top story.

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Congratulations for top story 🎉 very beautifully describes the love or affection with near ones

  • Sian N. Clutton2 years ago

    Beautiful. What a homely piece.

  • I have transported many times ❤️. Congratulations

  • The Best Trend2 years ago

    A good article.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    OMG, I miss my grandmother's apple pies. you brought back some really good memories.

  • Hello! Charming and poignant in it's simplicity; congratulations on Top Story. I also subscribed:)

  • Anna 2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Grandmas are special ! Love your story !

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    It's a powerful thing, smell.

  • 😘🥰U are smart to evoke memory with scent

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    I identify with this completely.

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