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Savior

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By Keith McHughPublished 26 days ago 1 min read

I am damaged,

Ravaged,

Mismanaged,

Dismantling the old,

Life was growing cold.

Scolded by the heat,

I cant feel my feet,

Admitting sweet defeat.

May i eat from your table,

I'm barely able to rest.

Is there another test?

Pestered by the enemy,

It was within my own entity,

Hurting what I couldn't see.

I damaged the best of me,

Ravaged a perfect body,

Mismanaged my priorities,

Quietly waiting for the end to be.

Please forgive me my friend,

I hope there's time to mend,

Bending time to start again,

Doing better where I can,

Striving to be a better man,

Everyday sticking to a plan,

The human very resilient,

Sentient,

Heaven sent,

We represent our creator,

Changing now is better then later,

You are your own Savior.

inspirational

About the Creator

Keith McHugh

Good day to the wonderful soul reading this. I'm so glad to be able to share my art with so many awesome people, with such great imaginations. I hope you enjoy my little contribution. See you in the station.

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