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Sacrifice

The one I couldn't make

By Zak ONeillPublished about a year ago 1 min read

To put it lightly, she got away

To be fair, I showed her the way

I wanted her to stay, yes

She had a soundproof stare

I was not the best

She needed me

I loved her

Ghastly

Late

heartbreak

About the Creator

Zak ONeill

Me attempting to entertain, and hopefully, tell a good tale every now and then.

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Love this

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Absolutely love this nonet. The regret is a tangible thing.

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    I can sense the heartache.

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