Round N round my head you GO,
A song I can't unhear, I KNOW.
Your voice, a loop that won't unwind,
A rhythm stitched into my mind.
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Round N round—NO space to breathe,
Your words still haunt, they NEVER leave.
Like voice trapped inside a room,
A GHOST that lingers in the gloom.
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Round N round, you SPIN me still,
A broken record, bending will.
I press REWIND, but it won’t end,
You play, repeat—AGAIN, AGAIN.
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Round N round, a dizzy blur,
I chase a song that once was pure.
But notes DECAY, and so do you,
Yet round my head, you’re always NEW.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (22)
Re-read this - I still appreciate it just as much.
I sure know that experience! The way you've written this captures it well. Makes it almost sound like an adventure but it is soooo not 😊 Great writing komal!
Beautiful!
A song gets stuck in my head like that , APT is the latest so far . lol
well done
Love the repetitive lines and rhymes in this - they add such impact :)
Your poem beautifully captures the cyclical nature of lingering thoughts and memories.
Gorgeous rhythm and beautiful words <3
Outstanding! Go KoKo Go! 🫶🏾💝
This demanded I read it three times. Obviously I love it.
Love everything about this.welldone ♦️♦️♦️💙💙♦️♦️♦️
attractive song
For want of a better word, this was a lovely round verse, Komal! It makes a lovely song.
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really Round N round
This is beautiful! Great job. Maryam is going to have a bit of a hallucination when she sees the photo though. Haha! Hang on tight Maryam!
One of my favorites of yours! Humanoid earworm.
I could feel the spin and hear the rhythm emanating from your words! Excellent work, komal.
Whoaaaa, this is so lovely! I'm trapped in this picture hehehe!
I had so much fun reading this.
Aww it can be a good thing at times, but annoying at other times. Such a lovely sweet poem.