Roots of Experience
Roots and Branches
My feet are on the ground,
Why are they?
Where did they come from?
What is keeping them going?
I cannot see what is ahead,
All I see is fog.
Why can't I see past the fog?
Looking back,
I see thick roots,
Some of them are covered in flowers,
Others are entangled in vines,
But all of them,
Stop right at my feet.
I bend down and gently touch a pink carnation,
Love and support wrap me up in a hug,
Reminding me that my family is with me,
Every step of the way.
I warily touch a thorn,
Pain threatens to pull me down forever,
But I persevere and mold that experience,
Into something that will make me kinder and stronger.
I touch a yellow daffodil,
Eternal charity and hope warms my bosom,
Gently saying that I am never alone,
That peace and joy await me beyond the end.
So I stand back up,
Head towards the fog,
With the roots growing behind my feet,
Gently pushing me,
Helping me endure and grow.
About the Creator
Rebecca Patton
Ever since discovering Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories. I also wrote my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception" on Amazon.
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Comments (9)
Lovely poetry.
That is a truly beautiful and thoughtful poem about finding strength in your past. The image of the roots pushing you forward is wonderful. Congratulations on your Top Story!
The poem carries a quiet strength, reminding us that growth often comes from both love and pain this message lands gently but profoundly.
Wow, I was drawn to your poetry, it's amazing
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is gorgeous.
Where do our feet take us? This is beautiful!
This was so positive and uplifting. Loved your poem!
Beautifully written, Rebecca!!!