Rooms Without Exit
A Free Verse Poem
Prologue
This is for Mikeydred's Octoberon challenge.
Our worries are plenty, and can entrap us, like rooms without exits.
May we find the exits to all our rooms.
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The hall encloses, planks of wood,
Each creak under me, a sign of doom.
I clutch at doors that bang abrupt,
The house looms large, then eats the room.
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Curtains sob with icy breath,
The mist distorts my ancient shape.
No sky, no starsβjust utter dark,
Each room an outlet for escape.
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The floorboards sink, pressed by my weight,
Their murmurs winding through thin cracks.
I shove, I tug, the doorknob grinsβ
A corridor, but the path turns back.
πππ ππππ ππππ ππππ ππππ ππππ ππππ Ceilings hang like too-dense clouds,
Homing in with quiet dread.
Walls buzz and shiver, thrum like veins,
Iβm pacing through a throbbing head.
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My fingers flounder, wet with sweat,
Locks turn and snap, forever barred.
I strain for air that gathers, fades,
The houseβs pulses cold and hard.
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Each of my treads widens the gap,
The endβs not near, no light ahead.
The house, it grows, my head shrinks smallβ
The rooms I find, their exits call.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (3)
well written
Great poem beautifully presented
Oooo, I really loved the imageries you've used here! You're so brilliant!