I came into this world
And you took care of me
Fed me and cleaned me
Made sure I went to school
You brushed the knots out of my hair
When I was sad, you took me to McD’s
When I was happy, you took me to the park
You were from the time
Of washing mouths out with soap
You worked a full-time job,
But still found the time to feed nine kids
You didn’t know how to be a mother,
But you tried
Now, our roles are reversed
It’s my turn to take care of you
A stroke has left you weakened
And you don’t need to be alone
As the only bio-daughter,
Your place belongs with me
Now it’s my turn
To cut up your food
And to wash your clothes
To pick up your medicines
And take you to the doctors
It’s my time to open up your bottles
It’s my time to cook for you
I don’t know how well I can fill your shoes
Until I try
I’m sure I’ll make mistakes
But I’ll always do my best
To do what is right for you
Just as you always did
What you thought was best for me
It’s your time to lean on me
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Comments (10)
Beautiful said....very relatable.
well done
Such passionate devotion in this piece MC!! I love the sense of duty but also the narrative of "I want to do this for you, not because I owe you but because I love you." So beautiful!!
bit heavy...
Aw, this is so full of willingness, its heavy, but warm.
I was so happy to see your name in my notifications! You're such a good daughter and I know your mom appreciates everything that you do so much! Sending you guys lots of love and hugs ❤️
Heartfelt
Wow, so sorry for the circumstances and so loving of you!! 🫶🏻🤗🤗🤗🤗
☺️ Hey, M Combs, I like how you have explored the title in your poem. I hope it does well. You got this!
This can be really hard on the daughter. Strength and patience to her!