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Rime of the Rainbow Dancer

Shimmering from the inside out

By K.B. Silver Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Merlin Lightpainting: https://www.pexels.com/photo/colorful-light-artwork-of-a-woman-11167637/

Slipped right through

Poised fingertips

The phantasmal

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i

b

b

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n

of multi-tonal hue

Covered in millions of

Razor sharp facets

S

T

R

E

A

M

S

of beaming light

leap and

Shine down

I swirl

Becoming tangled in the

Spectral turnabouts

Thoughtlessly rolling

Tucking my head

bursting out the cloudy door

─── ⋆⋅🌈⋅⋆ ──

I can see through the rainbow

Shimmering on the surface of my tears

To the glistening land

miraculously contained within

─── ⋆⋅🌈⋅⋆ ──

There has never been a way

To dive

Through and live

In the perfection wrung from

My subconscious being

─── ⋆⋅🌈⋅⋆ ──

Even collecting the torrential flow

Siphoning each drop away

Defending their salty volume from

The ravages of evaporation

Could never b r e a k the barrier

Bestowing upon me the power of

The Rainbow Dancer

I have to slice the surface tension

Take the

r

i

b

b

o

n

That’s the answer

─── ⋆⋅🌈⋅⋆ ──

As I spin and

Lift myself

Off the very ground with love

I see the tears and fear below

Light reflects in plasmic rays

Ricocheting, piercing the silvery

Shapely outer layer, forcing it to burst

Splashing rainbow reality

on the blank white canvas

boxing me in

K.B. Silver

⚬──────────🌈──────────⚬ ⚬──────────🌈──────────⚬

If you are a rainbow fan, go check out Mikeydred's November prompt!

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About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 2 months ago

    Love the shapes of this and the colours do shine through

  • Tim Carmichael2 months ago

    The imagery of the phantasmal ribbon and the tears shimmering with the rainbow reality inside is just breathtaking.

  • John R. Godwin2 months ago

    I'm fascinated by your work and this poem is another great reason for my fascination. As I was reading it I thought, "Hmmm...it would be nice if she had "ribbon" look more like a curving ribbon. Then I get to the end and see the "analog" version and there it is!! Your line breaks, word breaks, and even letter breaks are executed brilliantly. Sometimes using techniques like these can produce questionable results, but it's just spot on in this poem. Another gem!

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