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Reverse Sunset

My shadow came back.

By Jack FriendPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Reverse Sunset
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The somber of the night

Goes away

Daylight repeats the steps of its dance

Copying the sunrise

And again

She says things that a lover would say

Words that once retreated

Are repeated

Now with this dirt-toothed desperation

You are more flame than light

Darlin’ no

I will stay alone, cold.

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About the Creator

Jack Friend

Pizzaiolo, social worker, brewer, writer

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  • Dawnxisoul393artabout a year ago

    Your poetic verses evoke a poignant sense of longing and resilience, the imagery and emotions expressed resonate powerfully, beautifully crafted, love it, thank you very much for sharing!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Extraordinary piece

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    You did a great job.

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