Resurrección
The ultimate Eclipse
Eternal damnation adumbrated over humanity;
concealing the soul of man from God. Until
love interfered tearing the veil in two, breaking the chains held
in place, of my shame, through his
pain.
Saving the entire human race. The barren grave reuniting man back to God
eternally. The ultimate eclipse, the stone that was rolled away.
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In honor of Easter Sunday, in the Christian faith the resurrection of Jesus Christ is celebrated.
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Natasha Collazo
Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026
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Comments (13)
Absolutely beautiful acrostic. Nicely Done!!
This was beautiful!
WOW. JUST WOW. Yes I love how you pulled this into to the resurrection, so well done
"The ultimate eclipse, the stone that was rolled away." great final line Natasha, and a clever way of taking on the eclipse concept! Topical for Easter as well. I like how this entry has used the light/dark imagery to reflect the idea of salvation.
Amen!!!!! Truly the ultimate eclipse. So proud of you for writing this one :)
Beautiful!!💖
And for the first time ever, humanity stood in the shadow of the eclipse from that great stone & said, "At last I see!" And from somewhere deep inside the otherwise empty tomb where Satan deigned to claim their latest victim, a voice responded, "See what?"
Oh Sunny, this was such a brilliant take on this challenge! You nailed it!
He is risen indeed! This is stunning, Natasha! “The ultimate eclipse” is such a beautiful declaration.
Beautiful poem on the basis of Christianity.
I love the way you mixed the two events! Absolutely amazing!
Loved every word of this! Bravo!
So fitting for the Easter season. Beautifully said Natasha.