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Rendering

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By Rowan Finley Published 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read

The rendering of her tears were not her end,

but they were just the beginning of the way in which her story would soon mend.

With a swallows worth of hope and a puff of timely stardust,

her aspirations dashed off in a wind gust,

all before the candle flame went out.

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Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Archery Owl6 months ago

    She was an inspiration to us all

  • I'm not sure if her story takes an upturn, that's what makes me wonder why I like this poem. It's hopeful ☺️

  • Kathy Mary 6 months ago

    “Your writing has real appeal. With a smart promo plan, it could reach so many more readers, open to chatting?”

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