Remembered Souls
Love in 50-word entry
Did we love in another life?
when the world was slower, love unhurried?
Did we walk through fields, swear our vows by the Nile River,
or stand as knights, hands joined in oath?
I knew you the moment we met.
Perhaps love, timeless and true,
has found us once again.
About the Creator
Cindy🎀
Hey, I’m Cindy – a K-pop newbie turned addict with a keyboard and way too many opinions. When I’m not screaming about talented artists, I’m writing poetry or ranting about my life.
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Comments (7)
Wow so beautiful. A familiar type of everlasting love you describe here in this poem. Love it.
Oh man: world slower ~ love unhurried, well ain’t that a beauty. Anything rushed will never be right. But this love you speak of by the River Nile — the knights —the two joining hands in an oath, what a smooth relation. A nice touch at the end with what seemed like reincarnation 👌🏽👏🏽🤗♥️
Beautiful love poem Cindy. - Going way back to the Nile River, way back in time - yes to another life that was more simple than you find today. Well Done!!
Such a beautifully timeless reflection! It feels like a deep, soulful connection across lifetimes. It's like love transcends time and finds its way back. I really felt the wistful, eternal vibe. Lovely! 💖✨
I especially loved the last two lines! So beautiful!
this is beautiful Cindy! great work!
Love over the ages. Immortal Beloved. Nice, Cindy. Good luck in the challenge!