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Rejection (Sonnet 1)

Italian Sonnet

By Conor DarrallPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
Rejection (Sonnet 1)
Photo by Steve Johnson on Unsplash

A grieving day to follow prizing night,

Quintessence of self-sorrow, hazy blue,

One brief display of hope for pathways new,

Now all dismissed, no luck with dawn's first light.

Had I the skills to do the damn thing right:

The verbiage and wit to lull and woo,

The song that story-tellers all pursue!

Instead of cock-eyed prose, so tired and trite.

Now put aside flirtation with your grief,

And shake yourself, Con-boy, just write the next.

(Perhaps redemption lies within the text,

Some seed to grow anew to self-belief)

A coffee and a laugh will help to thin,

With growing heart, rejection and chagrin.

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About the Creator

Conor Darrall

Short stories, poetry and some burble . Irish traditional musician, medieval swords guy, draoi and strange egg. Bipolar/ADD/CPTSD/Brain Damage. Currently querying my novel 'The Forgotten 47' - @conordarrall / www.conordarrall.com

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  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Congratulations on your honorable mention! 🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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