A grieving day to follow prizing night,
Quintessence of self-sorrow, hazy blue,
One brief display of hope for pathways new,
Now all dismissed, no luck with dawn's first light.
Had I the skills to do the damn thing right:
The verbiage and wit to lull and woo,
The song that story-tellers all pursue!
Instead of cock-eyed prose, so tired and trite.
Now put aside flirtation with your grief,
And shake yourself, Con-boy, just write the next.
(Perhaps redemption lies within the text,
Some seed to grow anew to self-belief)
A coffee and a laugh will help to thin,
With growing heart, rejection and chagrin.
About the Creator
Conor Darrall
Short stories, poetry and some burble . Irish traditional musician, medieval swords guy, draoi and strange egg. Bipolar/ADD/CPTSD/Brain Damage. Currently querying my novel 'The Forgotten 47' - @conordarrall / www.conordarrall.com
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



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