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Reflections

Looking at Myself, Talking to You

By Bradley RamseyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Image: Ethan Hoover via Unsplash

I’m looking back at you,

Do you see it, too?

Tired eyes, a war within,

A broken man, wearing thin.

*

You can’t handle any of this,

Should I embrace the abyss?

You're nothing but a broken shell,

I’m a man that’s been through hell.

*

All these scars on your soul,

Can’t recall when I felt whole,

You just want her to fix this,

All I need is a single kiss.

*

I’m here, so don’t listen,

His lies sparkle and glisten,

You want to breathe, to feel okay,

I need help to keep the demons at bay.

*

I don’t know where to start,

I will be careful with your heart,

Will you pick me up when I fall?

I will be there with you through it all.

*

My hope has been depleted,

You're broken, not defeated,

Can you see past this night?

Together, we can share the light.

*

Sorrow pulls me deeper down,

Let it go, or you will surely drown,

May I wash upon your shore?

My arms are open; say no more.

*

I brought along these pieces of me,

Reflections of who you used to be,

Should I just leave them all behind?

They no longer serve your design.

*

I suppose you’ve been right all along,

You were drawn to the truth of my song,

I can start anew within your embrace,

Anything is possible in this endless space.

*

Stop and look in my sapphire eyes,

The voices have ceased their cries,

Bask in peace, what do you see?

I see the future, reflections of you and me.

love poems

About the Creator

Bradley Ramsey

Lover of dogs, gaming, and long walks on the beach. Content Marketing Manager by day, aspiring writer by night. Alone, we cannot change the world, but we can create better ones.

Find me on Substack -> bradleyramsey.substack.com

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  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Beautiful poem! Very lyrical! I like that hope was the final note amongst the tension

  • Dawnxisoul393art2 years ago

    The repetition of the contrasting perspectives highlights the internal conflict within the narrator, thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.

  • Sarah Rusch2 years ago

    This is so beautiful! Amazing writing. :)

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