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Wonderland challenge: Day 3 (Senryū)

By Susan Fourtané Published 8 months ago 1 min read
Red
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It’s red what I see.

Why did you hide it from me?

Here, drink his blood now.

~~~

©️Susan Fourtané, 2025 - All rights reserved

For the Wonderland challenge:

SenryuFor Fun

About the Creator

Susan Fourtané

Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.

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  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    WOW, I wasn't expecting that ending! This was riveting!

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    Wonderfully done, Susan <3

  • Aspen Marie 8 months ago

    Dark and spicy - I love it

  • Ellie Hoovs8 months ago

    Fantastic!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡8 months ago

    ⚡♥️⚡

  • I'll so happily drink it hehehehehehehe. Loved your poem!

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