Burnt orange fronds whoosh-
maples squint, harvest flickers,
leafing through my fall
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Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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"I just can't do this anymore..." "Do what?" What can't you do? Put gas in your own car? I swear to God you make me take care of everything, don't you? You know I'm on my way to work right now but that never stops you from bothering me, does it?"
By Shirley Belk7 days ago in Fiction
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The colour and the sound in the first line. Nicely captured. The second line also engaged our senses. Love the flicker of the harvest. Amazing how you pulled it back to a home of emotions, sad or neutral. Nicely done Marilyn. Best of luck on the challenge 🤗❤️
The photo matches your haiku perfectly.
I can practically feel autumn in your words. So beautiful.
I especially loved the last line! Such a beautiful Haiku!
I love how this haiku captures the vivid colours and movement of autumn in such a crisp, lively way 🍂.
Love it, also the photo is so beautiful :)
Good luck with the challenge... I really like this.
Great color description. Gives us the feel of fall
Good luck with the challenge! Great entry.