reclaiming my wildness one sunspot at a time
{{Breakup Nonet}} Challenge
By MorganaPublished about a year ago β’ Updated about a year ago β’ 1 min read
new freckles peek through my breasts' white flesh
blossoming like dandelions
on this chemical-free lawn
(i fired pest control, too)
spared from your modest
puritan shit,
i sunbathe
fully
nude.
Comments (27)
great work
So beautifully written, the epitome of freedom and unapologetic oneness with nature.
Once you start to purge, everything's gotta go! Hahaha. Wonderfully liberating!
Love this. Congratulations on the Top Story, too.
Beautiful
This one has such a fresh sensation! I can feel the essence of becoming one with nature here - the return - the breakaway from chemicals and synthetic waste. Amazing!
beautiful article i love it
Dayum...this...is just sublime. Another stunner from you, Ms Miller. It felt...like has been said before, like a breakup and breakout. Decadent and wholesome and empowering! Congrats on Top Storydom!
nice poem and congratulations on the top story.
Lovely poem π
Whoa. Not just a break up, but a break out! A good one, Angela! Congrats on the TS!
Oh I love the free, unspoilt beauty in this (and you). Congratulations on your Top Story!
This feels so decadent but in a wholesome, glorious way.
Beautiful!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Forgot to say congratulations on TSπ₯³
Love it!! Bye to the prude and crapola.
Such freedom!!
Freedom! I can feel the release. Wonderful piece. Congrats on the TS.
π₯ YES! To all of it! Perfect liberating piece of work, Morgana. π₯βοΈ
This felt so liberating! Loved your Nonet!
Itβs hard to imagine a metaphor more expressive of freedom than lying au natural in nature. Spared from your modest puritan shit is an awesome line too! Absolutely a unique approach to the challenge, Morgana!
A powerful nonet and a great challenge entry. Well done!
Just lovely π₯°
Awesome!!! You make freedom sound so liberating.