I wonder,
Have the ghosts of my past
ever haunted a happy room
Maybe followed a tune down memory lane
and for a moment enjoyed the view
Did you see me dancing through the flowers?
Did you feel like dancing too?
Was there a time my spirit kept you warm,
Or was I always the chill in the room?
And I wonder,
When my demons come to laugh at how
you ripped my heart in two
Do your angels ever go to cry
those very same words to you
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Daynah Rose
I have at least 3 streams of inner monologue at any given time. I'm here to share them with you.
Fighter. Loser. Advocate. Representative. Writer. Australian. Milennial. Misfit.
Human.
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Beautiful and emotional ❤️ Just lovely!
This was so emotional and powerful! Loved it!
Whew, this one got me
Wow! This is a powerful poem! The second stanza is my favorite!
That was unique and very thought provoking. I especially like the angels/demons dichotomy.
good one
Some beautiful words, I found this very heartfelt. Very impressed