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Ravens Circle

A poem from "Karma"

By Fenris NMPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

I lay here freezing in the snow

So still

That the scavengers take notice

Ravens encircle me

From above

And they remind me

Of a mobile

They crow out compliments:

“Nice eyes!”

How kind of them

“I call the nose!”

Charmers, the lot of them

They offer such kind words

To a corpse

I lay unmoving as they land

And my heart has the

Audacity to give me away

I watch them scatter

And only black feathers

Against white snow remain

I rise because the jig is up

I’ve been caught alive, and

Ravens have excellent memory

They’ll tell their friends of a

Living corpse ambling around

Who doesn’t have the decency

To stay dead

They’ll lament, and I’ll echo their cries

“What a waste of a dead body.”

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Fenris NM

A bard by any other name, I suppose, can still attempt at being a bard. I hope to create something that many people can engage with. If you like my work, you can buy my first book here!

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