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Rain Storm

the senses

By Raine FielderPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Rain Storm
Photo by Geetanjal Khanna on Unsplash

Growling rumbles - felt to the core.

Fingers of light, dance - broken, erratic

Musk and roses - familiar, warm

Breaths of salty earth moisten the tongue.

A kiss on the cheek from the heavens

raindrop by raindrop I fall in love with the sky.

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About the Creator

Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

https://linktr.ee/RaineFielder

I will NEVER use AI for anything I create.

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