In the quiet hush of rain-soaked dawn
The whisper of rain drops spreads its petrichor
As the drops fall on the green verdant
They emit light ever so luminescent
The beads of droplets dance like a cascade
Their sound, a magical serenade
Innocence playing merrily in the puddle
Feeling love, rain's cuddle
Poet's note:
I found this piece years old on one of my old notebooks thought I should post it.
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It’s beautiful! Love how you describe the rain drops.
Excellent! I love your poetry - nature poetry is my favorite. “Rain’s cuddle” is so clever. I am subscribing to you. Maybe you will check out my poems. 💕
the language here is so descriptive, the beads of droplets, rain-soaked dawn- so well done!!!
You have a remarkable way with words. Please never stop writing 👌✍️🏆♦️
Wonderful!
Wow, that’s truly wonderful! Your vivid description of the rain is beautifully evocative ✨
A delightful and heartwarming piece!
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful! The way you’ve captured the rain’s magic and turned it into such a vivid and serene moment is enchanting. It’s like I could hear the raindrops and feel that cozy embrace—such timeless charm in your words! ❤✨ Plus, this "Poet's Note?" makes me feel like a stupid. I mean, it's ok if we right 'Author's Note' in the footer but poet's note feels more accurate and now, I feel absurd. 😅😄