Yellow sun slashing
Through the last hanging low leaves
Of our life autumn.
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I was inspired by D.J.Reddal 's haiku this morning. Read it below:
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Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Comments (5)
This was absolutely beautiful! Loved your poem!
Your metaphor is melancholy but implies acceptance of the inevitable, and the alliterative sun slashing was deft! Thanks for bringing attention to my humble scribbling!
Beautiful poem and full of autumn scenes. Love it!
it is more than just words...loved it...keep up the good word..best of luck and also check my work out
Beautiful and packed with emotion! really well done Gabriela!