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Quadru-haiku

Letting go

By Debbi LonmonPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Laguna Beach

Saw it in your eyes

like a fire on a mountain

a soft silent rage

Felt it in your smile

a reflection of myself

salt water that burns

Touched by your silence

your dreamy unspoken words

shook my hidden world

It was your breathing

the air I craved and chocked on

exhaling goodbye

heartbreak

About the Creator

Debbi Lonmon

I am a musician/songwriter and practicing story teller.

I also love poetry and creative writing.

It's wonderful to be part of a group like this. Wish I'd joined sooner:-)

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