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Proud Boy

~ Haiku String

By Rowan Finley Published 11 months ago 1 min read
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Proud boy holds his flag

His confidence grows each day

Parents smile at him

~ ~ ~

He loves badminton

Cricket is also such fun

Fast and full of life

~ ~ ~

Samosa tastes great

When the day is nearing end

He eats quite a lot

~ ~ ~

Numbers are his friend

School - he is doing so well

Show and tell great grades

~ ~ ~

His sister is mad

He gets all the attention

She wants to beat him

~ ~ ~

But he is too fast

He will sure grow up faster

to be a leader

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Karan w. 11 months ago

    Wow! This is a very wonderful poem; it is very beautiful. Did you really meet such a boy in India?

  • Sibley Shamra11 months ago

    Love the way this embodies a childlike eagerness to make their family proud. :) great work!

  • A delightful read… a cute tale wrapped in haikus🤗.

  • Maryam Batool11 months ago

    Woah, Really? How'd you get the inspo to write about an Indian boy..? That's actually really cool! Since I know only one Indian, I can see a little SK in this poem. 😄😄 From cricket to samosas—this one's a delight! He eats quite a lot, hehe 😆 PS: That kid wearing a dhoti is really cute 😄

  • L.K. Rolan11 months ago

    I like this! I don't think I've ever seen a Haiku string before, it's really cool!

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