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Prisoner to Your Mother

She hates me, I hate hernot you have to choose

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Prisoner to Your Mother

I move like a shadow in her house,

where silence is louder than words,

each glance a bar, each sigh a lock,

and love feels like a borrowed sword.

Her smile blooms soft when you are near,

a practiced grace, a sweet disguise,

but when you turn—the warmth dissolves,

her gaze turns cold as subzero ice.

I speak in whispers, measured, small,

a careful guest within her walls,

where every kindness feels rehearsed,

and freedom crumbles as it falls.

You are my sun, my sweetest sin,

yet chained, I stand, a quiet dove,

a prisoner not to love itself

but to the mother of my love.

When you are there, she is so nice;

when you turn to go, she is subzero ice.

Let’s buy a house, put her in a home.

I want you to myself, just us two in our home.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • TheSpinstress 11 months ago

    What a horrible position to be in! It's so difficult to convince people that you're being treated badly when the perpetrator is skilled at acting butter-wouldn't-melt with others around.

  • Pure Crown11 months ago

    Well written

  • C. Rommial Butler11 months ago

    Well-wrought!

  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    What a poem of love and hate and confusion. The image also tells a lot. Good job.

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