Prisoner to Your Mother
She hates me, I hate hernot you have to choose

Prisoner to Your Mother
I move like a shadow in her house,
where silence is louder than words,
each glance a bar, each sigh a lock,
and love feels like a borrowed sword.
Her smile blooms soft when you are near,
a practiced grace, a sweet disguise,
but when you turn—the warmth dissolves,
her gaze turns cold as subzero ice.
I speak in whispers, measured, small,
a careful guest within her walls,
where every kindness feels rehearsed,
and freedom crumbles as it falls.
You are my sun, my sweetest sin,
yet chained, I stand, a quiet dove,
a prisoner not to love itself
but to the mother of my love.
When you are there, she is so nice;
when you turn to go, she is subzero ice.
Let’s buy a house, put her in a home.
I want you to myself, just us two in our home.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️



Comments (4)
What a horrible position to be in! It's so difficult to convince people that you're being treated badly when the perpetrator is skilled at acting butter-wouldn't-melt with others around.
Well written
Well-wrought!
What a poem of love and hate and confusion. The image also tells a lot. Good job.