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Prettier Asleep

Love poem that sounds more like obsession

By Silver DauxPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Prettier Asleep
Photo by Fabrizio Conti on Unsplash

I cannot stop dreaming.

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There are uncharted icebergs in the blue oceans swirling

Around pits, fathomless and dark, of cold curiosity.

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To call them eyes is too mortal.

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He is of the dust that descends from Olympus,

Scatters heartbeats and cosmic desires on the wind.

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I hear his secrets in my sleep.

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They are warm-blooded things with feral wants,

Mapped out along the aristocratic lines of his own yearning.

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There is no finishing.

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I am lost in the labyrinth of flickering images and oil paintings,

The deep navy sky splitting open into ribbons of green.

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He is the dream itself.

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This is not an infatuation but a way to taste a heartbeat.

I want to press lips to stone and taste the salt of the earth.

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I want to taste his thoughts.

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Those thoughts in your mind must be sweet for how long

They have been fermenting, gaining strength, ripening.

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Undress yourself for me.

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Let me peer through the violent storms covering his eyes

Into the glacial tundra stretching the length of his soul.

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He isn't kind.

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And kindness is overrated in a world of absolute hunger

Where starvation occurs more rapidly than sorrow.

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It's time for sleep again.

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The dreams are more tolerable when my eyes are shut.

Fantasy is always prettier against a backdrop of black.

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And he's prettier dreaming.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • JBaz4 months ago

    Your particular carefully chosen words add an emotional 'Chill ' feel throughout the piece. A moving baring your soul to the reader. I feel and ache with in every line

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