I pray that she would see the beauty all around,
that she’d keep her head held high, not toward the ground.
Surround her with powerful praise,
while she’s young and for the rest of her days.
When she grows up, may she be a happy mother,
and I hope she looks back and realizes how much I truly love her!
Bless her swimming mind with dreams that are sweet,
and may there be many an angel for her to meet.
I just hope she grows more generous,
because a gracious life is full of splendidness!
Thank you for her unique style,
she needs a loving Savior to walk with her during the extra mile.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Aww, each line feels like a hug, especially “bless her swimming mind with dreams that are sweet”—what a lovely image! I like her bracelets! ✨
She’s a special person ❤️😊