
Photo taken by Mike Navolta
Steel mind does not bend
I am automatic now
Perfectly r.o.b.o.t.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (4)
Love the formatting of r.o.b.o.t which adds just the right glitchy touch.
This was an ominous look into the future! Loved your Haiku!
In combination with the photo this poem fairly bristles with menace. I especially love the line Steel mind does not bend! Powerful imagery multiplied by the following lines. Great work, Rowan!
Y. E. S. !