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Point of View

like the sun and moon

By Jennidoll of (jennidoll.inc)Published 19 days ago 2 min read
Top Story - December 2025
Point of View
Photo by Bernd 📷 Dittrich on Unsplash

Eyes of a stranger,

A look and a glance,

Replaying the moment,

Has me in a trance

Face of an Angel,

wearing black wings,

Thinking of her,

Thinking of things

Things I don’t know,

Things that I want,

Things that I think,

Voices that haunt

Modern day goddess,

The girl talks to ghosts,

I’ve been observing,

Taking down notes

Walking through portals,

Trying to find her,

Hearing her voice,

Favorite reminder

Feeling conflicted,

Eyes deep as the ocean,

Riding the waves,

Avoiding emotion

Pretty and kind,

A total fox,

Mysterious musings,

What’s in the box?

Hiding my thoughts,

Denying what’s real

Not understanding,

Things that I feel

Moth to a flame,

Flame getting stronger,

Knowing I can’t hide,

These thoughts much longer

Highly magnetic,

Warrior vibe,

Piercing the veil,

Her and her tribe

Watching her now,

Where does she go?

What does she write?

Wanting to know.

The look in her eyes,

What does it mean?

She’s giving that look,

She makes me feel seen.

Seeing beyond,

Wishes and dreams,

Wanting that look,

To be as it seems.

Beautiful eyes,

Shaded by blue,

Wished for the moment,

I think that she knew.

***

Paused in a moment,

Both of us staring,

Holding that gaze,

The rest I’m not sharing

Caught in a chance,

Dancing in time,

Eyes keep the rhythm,

I spit the rhyme

Wanting to linger,

Stare in your eyes,

Unravel the things,

That you disguise

Feeling is knowing,

You cannot hide,

Things that you want,

I know that you tried.

Eyes of a stranger,

New point of view,

What do you see?

Beneath all the Blue?

This depth that I carry,

It’s not for the weak.

When I close my eyes,

there’s things that I seek.

What do I want?

You want to know.

Yes, there are things.

Revealing them slow.

Moment of truth,

What will it be?

Will you be real,

and honest with me?

Eyes are a mirror,

You reflect me,

You reflect things,

that I also see.

Seeking me,

Seeking you,

seeking things,

We know are true

Beyond the veil,

Beyond the mask

Beyond the things,

We dare to ask

Close to me,

Close to you,

Met your gaze,

As if on cue

Cue the music,

Dim the lights,

Take my hand,

Into the night

Close your eyes,

Take a chance,

Trust what you feel,

in that lingering glance.

Free VerseStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Jennidoll of (jennidoll.inc)

I am a writer, photographer, and a storyteller. I gain inspiration from the haunted and the beautiful, and the mysterious 'in between'. Music is my Muse and so are all of you. Everyone is a character in my story. Welcome to my storyland.

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  • James13 days ago

    Do love the poem. However, there are, possibly, a couple of places that could use some editing. Sorry, I think it is a top poem!

  • Congratulations 🎊 on your Top Story!!!!

  • Kaitlin Shanks15 days ago

    I love this poem's rhyming and flow. I feel like this would be a great poem to read out loud.

  • Darkos19 days ago

    Woaw amazing Poem ! and photo. You are a wonderful writer!

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