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POEM - Clatter Of Precious Thing

By Jacky Kapadia

By Jacky KapadiaPublished 6 months ago 4 min read
POEM - Clatter Of Precious Thing
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The silence held them first, those precious things,

Arranged with care on shelves of polished oak,

Or velvet-lined within small, satin rings.

Each gleam a promise carefully awoke:

The porcelain shepherdess, forever mild,

The pocket watch, its chain a golden snake,

The jade-carved horse, its spirit still half wild,

The crystal bowl, where light would bend and break

For pure delight. A captured, breathless grace,

A fragile world held perfectly in place.

We knew their worth, inscribed in careful ledgers,

In whispered tales of provenance and cost,

In anxious hands that smoothed away rough edges,

In sacrifices made, or fortunes lost

To own a sliver of this curated light.

We dusted them with reverence and fear,

Shut curtains lest the sun prove over-bright,

And kept the heavy atmosphere austere.

They were not things, but vessels for our pride,

Our measured worth displayed and ratified.

Then came the Clatter. Sudden. Not a chime,

But raw collision, chaotic and stark.

A careless elbow swung in careless time,

A startled jump igniting unseen spark

Of chaos in the ordered, quiet room.

The shepherdess, she flew from her high ledge,

Her pastoral dream met unforgiving doom

Upon the hearth’s unyielding, stone-cold edge.

A shriek of porcelain, sharp and white and clean,

Shattered the stillness of the tranquil scene.

The chain, the watch – they followed in the rush,

A tumbling, clinking, discordant cascade

Across the floor, a frantic, metal crush.

The jade horse leapt, by trembling hands betrayed,

And struck the bowl, a ringing, crystal knell

That echoed through the suddenly vast space.

A symphony of breaking, where once fell

Only the softest sighs. We watched the grace

Of order fracture into frantic sound,

Preciousness lying scattered on the ground.

A breath held tight. Then movement, sharp and fast –

Not towards the wreckage, but away, retreat.

A shadow crossed the face that had been cast

In adoration. Bitter and un-sweet,

The taste of loss, of value overthrown.

The careful ledger entries blurred and bled.

That pristine world, so meticulously sewn,

Lay in sharp shards, abruptly, newly dead.

The velvet rings gaped empty, dark, and wide,

Where perfect, quiet treasures used to reside.

But slowly, from the wreckage on the floor,

A different kind of preciousness took hold.

Not measured by the cost behind a door,

Or tales of markets, bought or dearly sold,

But by the trembling hand that reached out first

To gather fragments, sharp yet strangely warm.

A voice, thick-clogged, that whispered, "Was it cursed,

This quiet hoard?" Then, weathering the storm

Of shock and anger, came a different sight:

Two hands now working in the fading light.

Not servants hired for their gentle touch,

But hands that knew the weight of daily strain,

Now sorting shards, though knowing not so much

Could be restored. Each sliver caused new pain,

Yet still they worked. The watch, its crystal cracked,

Still faintly ticked against the listener’s ear.

The jade horse, chipped, its spirit not retracted,

Stood lopsided, yet devoid of fear.

The bowl, a jagged curve, still caught the glow

Of sunset, fractured rainbows down below.

The Clatter broke the silence, broke the spell

Of perfect, frozen, isolated worth.

It rang the bell that only chaos knells,

Disrupting heaven, bringing hell to earth

Of curated desire. Yet in the fall,

A deeper resonance began to sound:

The preciousness inherent in us all,

In shared repair on this uncertain ground.

The value shifted, starkly rearranged,

From object owned to fragile bond exchanged.

No ledger holds the worth of patient hands

That sift through ruin, not with blame, but care.

No provenance can trace the subtle strands

Of love that mends what shatters beyond repair,

Not to its former, silent, cold display,

But to a new shape, flawed and battle-scarred,

Worn by the journey of the present day.

The Clatter left the spirit shaken, marred,

But strangely lighter. Less was held so tight,

More precious now, bathed in forgiving light.

The broken bowl reflects a fractured sun,

The chipped horse stands, its story more complete,

The ticking watch records the work begun

When perfect silence suffered its defeat.

The shepherdess? A memory, a ghost.

But in her place, a stronger vessel stands:

The human heart, where preciousness is host

Not to mute objects, kept by fearful hands,

But to the courage gathered in the din,

To build anew when cherished worlds cave in.

The Clatter fades. A different silence grows,

Not void of loss, but rich with what survives,

The preciousness that only living knows,

Forged in the moment where connection thrives.

Short Summary:

"The Clatter of Precious Things" explores the violent disruption of curated, material value ("precious things" arranged in silent perfection) by an accidental, chaotic event ("the Clatter"). The poem details the shock, loss, and initial recoil from the shattered objects, symbols of pride and measured worth. However, it ultimately reveals a profound shift: the true, enduring preciousness emerges not in the objects themselves, but in the shared human response – the patient, caring effort to mend the broken, the resilience found amidst ruin, and the forging of deeper connections ("fragile bond exchanged"). The "Clatter" becomes a catalyst, breaking the spell of isolated materialism and uncovering a more resilient, human preciousness inherent in compassion, shared vulnerability, and the courage to rebuild imperfectly after loss. The value moves from external display to internal strength and connection.

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Jacky Kapadia

Driven by a passion for digital innovation, I am a social media influencer & digital marketer with a talent for simplifying the complexities of the digital world. Let’s connect & explore the future together—follow me on LinkedIn And Medium

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