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Playing with the Haiku words

My haiku, my take poem, and thirdly my end Haiku

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024

Once again my take on a Haike, turning it to three I enjoy playing with The haiku what do you think? Please like if you do and comment ❤️

The Haiku

Dancing brings danger,

Flowing with rhythm, beware—

Don't break a leg now.

My interpretation

The slippery ice

heat melting the audience

oh no broken bones

The end Haiku

Both feet on the ground

forgetting about the show

look after your limbs

Haiku

About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Marie381Uk (Author)about a year ago

    Please don’t pass by, if you enjoyed it subscribe to me like and follow I need your support ❤️❤️❤️🌹

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