the deepest kind of love
locked in the brain
after years away
you may not know where you stand
at first, you may believe there's hope
yearn, weep, give a chance
when you say it out loud, it disappears
those seconds before storm
matter the most
never say these words!
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Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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Comments (6)
Ah, the rollercoaster of platonic love—deep, unshaken, yet hanging by a thread of unspoken words. One wrong move, poof! Gone. Best to keep it locked in the vault and enjoy the ride!
Never say it first. That's what everyone says. Both of these poems are really evocative & good, Maggie.
Very much heartfelt, and a really lovely way to express love.
very nice <3
Fab ♦️😊♦️
Nice work , love the ending never speak these words.