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Pine needles thread rays of sun

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By Rowan Finley Published 13 days ago 1 min read

Pine needles thread rays of sun,

as the day is nearly finished and done.

You have won and you have the final say,

despite doubts of dreary, dappled gray.

You blow the winds of praise through the masts of my lungs,

your delight climbs every rung of my spirit.

All nature, grand and small, joins me with distinctive, artful worship and motion.

Diffusers of scented melodies and harmonies swell,

the tattered parts of stories tell.

Dancing to the sway of mossy tears and wrinkly old oak limbs,

it’s grounding to sense the resounding of the hearts every rhyming whim.

Gratitudenature poetry

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Colleen Walters13 days ago

    Woww... that photo is really stunning and yes, all of creation gets involved in worship of their Creator. Great job painting the vivid imagery here! 😊

  • Komal13 days ago

    This feels like a deep breath for the soul. It reads like a reminder that even tired days still get to end in wonder.

  • Archery Owl13 days ago

    There is such a beautiful sense of peace and worship in this. I also love the photo.

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