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Pillar of Sand and Salt

Heat forged to solid glass

By K.B. Silver Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2025
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I can take no more

Of the wretched

Scratching droning

That infiltrates my pounding head

I despise the incessant sound of chirping

Entitled and presumptive

A madly twirling bird

Only pausing for breath or

Direction at sentence end

The same endless discussion

Only one topic available

For consideration

No swapping or bending

My avenues of thought

No tributary conversation

Only a river of speech

Washing personal thoughts

Away to the realm of

Tangled captivity

Skeletal fingers trap and submerge

Forever in a sinking morass

Shifting conceptual silt forms a delta

Technically, a collection of

Individual entities

Every blossoming idea

Crushed and ground down

Moldable but inseparable

A temperamental medium

Building up the shape of me

A yellow rain slicker slung

Round the sloping humps

That might illicit thoughts

Of shoulders

Atop it sits a melting sphere

Supposedly my cranium

Now, sliding down my chest

Wind and sun deflected

Off misshapen shiny plastic

Still, I continue evanescing into

The tide from whence I came

It takes effort, access to reality

To hold together every grain

With one empowering wail

I reform, recalling every instant to my mind

Blazing, the burning sun's reflection

Bounces with every question

Off the shifting surface

My soft eternal hide, rippling

A despairing eruption of heat

From my charred and weary soul

Blasts the tiny crystals

A kiln of tempestuous fervor

Each crystalized consequence

Loosely composing my constantly morphing form

Flashes of the past

Stripped of mood lighting and their gun

Instigate a realignment

Melting instantly, atoms ooze and reconnect

Vitrified, to hard, gleaming glass

K.B. Silver

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About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    This poem captures the suffocating weight of unwanted noise and mental intrusion so accurately yet ends on this fierc empowering note. Beautifully done.

  • LJ Pollard 2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! Beautiful imagery!

  • Maria A. Perez2 months ago

    I enjoyed reading this. Loved the imagery.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    This felt like alchemy in ways. Well done, K.B. And congrats on TS!

  • Kera Hollow2 months ago

    I'm so curious, were you inspired by the sand sculpture to write this poem? Because the energy is perfectly matched!

  • Gohar Ali2 months ago

    Top

  • Calvin London2 months ago

    Lovely KB - well done on your Top story. I especially liked these two lines: "Only a river of speech Washing personal thoughts"

  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    Wow, what a striking piece! The imagery is so vivid and the emotion pours off the page. Congrats on your Top Story.

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Congratulations on your top story, KB! "A yellow rain slicker slung, Round the sloping humps, That might illicit thoughts." I love the imagery here. I read this poem several times, slowly, taking it all in. Astounding work ❣

  • Erick Galaviz2 months ago

    👏👏

  • Aman Khan2 months ago

    Gg

  • Sam Spinelli2 months ago

    This was cool— very surreal but still full of powerfully vivid verbal imagery. I like the contradiction here between erosion and permanence

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