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Phenomenal, Remarkable……

Can’t find a word!

By Jay LeTron DobbinsPublished 10 months ago 2 min read

Couldn’t stop looking at you this past weekend, now I have get grip on this and begin with some discipline!

You see I saw your beauty and felt you vibe! I knew my rib was lost, now I feel alive!

Two months from now, you might not remember me but since have the chance let tell you what got the best of me because all started with your remarkable and phenomenal untold beauty.

She was the words I lost and feeling that left me numb! Didn’t know that woman could make me so dumb!

Didn’t know what hit, have this feeling inside! You have that look that says let’s go back n a long ride! Remarkable is the word that comes next to me, but phenomenal is thought of the sight that I truly see, but somehow those words don’t fit a woman so lovely!

Come be my more joy and my midday poem, my everlasting hope at the end of the day, please be my beauty and come my way! Be that remarkable, phenomenal once in a life time incredible.

Stay with me until I find the words to fit you perfectly! Give me the chance to live my fantasy! Take you for evening and dance the night away! Give me the chance to take your heart as the music sway!

By my comfortable hand, and my calming way. I can give you morning sun as long as you give me moonlight. Make this thing so remarkable and phenomenal and let’s not end this ride until we finds better words to end the flight!

Come be the air I breathe and my midday thought, be the reason why I plan to do better than the last flowers bought! Remarkable is the way you can make the day come in and phenomenal is the way you can carry a sight, please let find the words that will give me many nights!

Come be my campfire story on an extended outdoor trip, be that chance that you give me to give your heart a grip! Just be the remarkable and phenomenal never-ending show, until find the right words just concentrate on something other than letting me go!

Please come with me and let tell you a wonderful story. About guy that outta hope, than won the lottery! Be my dinner date or quick lunch meeting, whatever it is just give this heart something calm to stop the irregular beating. Just be remarkable and don’t forget to bring phenomenal hang around until I find some better words, your looks are better than a flying formation of Thunderbirds!

In the mist of it all, just remember that I can always be that foundation of love and peaceful sanctuary! As long as you give me the chance to replace remarkable and phenomenal, can’t find the words that will what’s currently! Just promise until I do stay right next to me!

We can find something to do that’s remotely better that remarkable, but wouldn’t seem to better that phenomenal. Can we keep trying until we find the words that will describe you more perfectly? I couldn’t care less if it took the rest of my life with you next to me!

Remarkable, phenomenal….. I just can’t simply find a better word!

love poems

About the Creator

Jay LeTron Dobbins

Casual writer! Love to express in print! Tell people how you feel and love life to the fullest with no regrets. Try to say something good about a person when they can hear it, and not when they are gone! Love like no tomorrow.

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