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Petals in Peril

Elegy Of Endings

By Kenneth cruzPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Soft petals like snowflakes gently fall.

In a delicate last dance they float.

Like a final swan song before curtain call.

Exasperated by the sudden ending she wrote.

Now I know, no antidote can forestall.

Corrosion is inevitable, and compassion can be usurped by rot.

Endings are inescapable, despite gifts and forget me nots, like a petal love wilts and drops.

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  • Anna about a year ago

    This is the pure beauty of flowers. Fabulous poem!😊

  • Endings are always inescapable. It's the sad truth. Loved your poem!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Lovely and haunting. The imagery herein is amazing.

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