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Perspective

Beyond the blessings, the Creator waits .

By Emem IniPublished about a year ago 1 min read

God gives us all, with a loving hand

Everything we need, in this promised land

But He holds back a little, so we'll come near

And seek His face, and wipe away our tear

We praise the sun, for its shining light

The stars at night, for their celestial sight

The mountains high, the oceans wide

But forget the Creator, who resides inside

We thank the earth, for its fruitful ground

The rivers flowing, with a gentle sound

But neglect the One, who makes it all grow

And gives us life, as our spirits glow

Let's praise the Maker, of all we see

The One who loves us, eternally

For He gives us all, with a gracious hand

And waits for us, in His promised land

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Emem Ini

A honest writer writing about all experiences in life 😊❣️

There's more to me and they'll be slowly revealed in stories ..I hope you enjoy my works

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  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    Very beautiful and pleasing to read

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Perspective is nice. You related nature with much confidence. Thanks for that writing.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem. Indeed, how can you hear the cry of a baby, the song of a bird, or the lull of the vast ocean without believing a greater power exists?

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