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Perpetuity

The immutable nature of life

By Christiane WinterPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Perpetuity
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Let the fire burn.

What consumes can also feed;

Nothing can be lost.

//

Let the water flow.

What can cleanse also removes -

Nothing ever stays.

//

Let the air rise up.

What affects can still forgo -

Nothing can evolve.

//

Let the earth wander.

And when the ground below moves -

Everything remains.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Christiane Winter

Science fiction, horror, and dark comedy enthusiast. D&D + RPG afficionado. Like all aspiring authors, I have hundreds of stories, and almost none have been finished.

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  • Dean F. Hardy3 years ago

    Such an immediacy and subtle aggression to this piece.

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