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Perdition

a poem

By Randy BakerPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
imagine generated by author using Midjourney

The Serpent

wraps itself

like a chord

around the ego

of humanity,

strangling like

the headline

villain of

a newspaper.

Promises of grandeur;

a parallel path;

the onramp to

the Fall.

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About the Creator

Randy Baker

Poet, author, essayist.

My Vocal "Top Stories":

* The Breakers Motel * 7 * Holding On * Til Death Do Us Part * The Fisherman

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  • Poppy 2 years ago

    I love the phrase 'ego of humanity'. This is a great poem

  • so much said in so few words. Great take

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Really liked how the last three lines built so powerfully!! Nicely done!

  • Heather Zieffle 2 years ago

    This one hit home, especially with what's going on in the world. Another wonderful poem, Randy!

  • Sean A.2 years ago

    Great take on the challenge

  • RP2 years ago

    The biblical undertone and the metaphors in this are really good. Personally, I strongly dislike snakes, yet every blue moon I write about them and force myself to look at their images to overcome my fear.

  • Gerard DiLeo2 years ago

    Great lines, all!

  • T. Licht2 years ago

    Love this short powerful style!

  • Excellent work Randy. You touch on several topics - good vs. evil, misleading headlines from the media, fake promises and manipulation from politicians, and misguided paths—entangle humanity and lead to its downfall.

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