Light as a feather, peace of mind.
I want to feel this emotion and spirit on the inside.
Submit to his wishes.
Submit to his will.
Submit so my inner peace can heal.
Recharge, redo, erase all who must feel.
These feelings are self distructive.
Inner peace is like the crashing of waves against the rock, only I'm the Rock.
I want to be the rock who feels this peace inside.
The ocean used to be bring me peace now I'm far away from it.
From away from my home.
I don't feel peace, but I want to feel it again.
I want to hear the waves crashing against rocks.
To feel that peace I never felt in a long time.
Will I feel this way again?
Who's to say, only I can.
I lost so much, Gained a lot more.
But I miss that feel when I lose my eyes.
A happy sigh, something I Never felt a day in my life.
Until I listened to myself.
About the Creator
Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)
Author, blogger, and in 7 months I will be a mom.
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This was very deep and emotional! I loved it!